I like the way that you have written a sentence with 'suddenly' at the start of the sentence. That really helps me as a reader get into your story! I can see you are thinking about your capital letters and your full stops. You have also included some great descriptive language in your writing with the words around the fireworks.
I like the way that you have written a sentence with 'suddenly' at the start of the sentence. That really helps me as a reader get into your story! I can see you are thinking about your capital letters and your full stops. You have also included some great descriptive language in your writing with the words around the fireworks.
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